NZ Visual Diary - entry 425 (postscript)
compositional choices
please do not climb ladder
My compositional decisions in entry 425 — please do not climb ladder — had left me unsettled. I played with the picture’s original composition to produce an off-centre photograph, electing a 5x4 format rather than a centred image within a square format.
I believe I prefer the compositional choices of the image above and not those of the original post, as reproduced below:
I would be delighted to hear from patrons of my Substack.
Which version of the photograph grabs you, assuming either does: the centred or off-centred image?
Agree with you, both the ratio AND change in centre point is good, i feel the gravity of the tunnel more. Funny that Bjorn’s feeling is exactly opposite for same reasons!